Charlie (qingri) wrote in inkforblood,

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Headscratching. Once again something doesnt sound right :/

I stopped writing this because i didn't think it sounded right. Kinda like when Arthur burnt down the village hall (different story). I had another idea shortly after writing this bit up that Em's father could find Julian in her room instead? I want Emelin to die in front of Julian and i want her to bleed out. I know it sounds horrible but its vital in my head. If she bleeds out, Julian has no time to try and turn her. If she dies in front of him he will give up hope on her and not know that she turns anyway.
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